Through out the world there are a lot advertisement .Their on the radio/tv commercials ,Ads on the buses,billboards, and gas station.According to kalle lasn in her passage "hype" she writes "commercial pollution floods your brain"and i do agree with her.The main idea is to explain throughout the passage how harmfully advertisements can become in our daily lives.
One reason why I agree with Kalle is because i have personally experience being polluted by the commercials on the the radio . Their was a commercial on the radio with a singer that I am a fan to talking about an a false rumor he wanted to clear out .That commercial made me want to wait to hear what was going on.
Another reason why i agree is because .There was a contest from logo the t v channel if we can count how many times the show"drag race" commercial was to show from monday through friday who ever was to win they will win a trip to Colombia. I had have to record that channel for days to count how many thime the commercial for that show came on to see if i could win.
This needs further development of the body paragraphs and also summary--it is not passing as it is
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